Research and planning - new style sheet plus audience feedback

After deciding to redesign my film review page, I constructed a new style sheet. I kept a lot of the same ideas. For example the main picture and the colour scheme.
I asked a Professional graphic designer called Mia Matson her thoughts about my new design. She gave me some constructive feedback. I she said the design was very original and the title would be eye catching. She also mentioned the fact that it is not a conventional layout for a review page with one of the biggest differences being the test will not appear in columns.
After her feedback i decided to keep the text out of columns as i thing it makes the design look smoother.